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Old 04-11-2008, 08:58 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Welcome to Glamour1!

First off, I'll say that your post processing is a style that isn't common here -- so thanks for daring to post something so different! For most of what we see here, your shot is over processed -- but clearly that was the intent of your work.

Secondly, evaluating it as it is, I'd say great job. I wish there was at least some detail in the hair, but that's the only thing I'd do differently -- not that I could achieve this style. It works well as a portrait crop also -- and the second eye just barely coming out of the shadow is a very well planned touch!
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Model too centered. White spot or area on top of head (don't know what it is). Hair blends with background.

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Model too centered. White spot or area on top of head (don't know what it is). Hair blends with background.

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i believe it is light. The same is at the ends of her hair behind her. The effect did turn those portions a little blocky, though.
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i believe it is light. The same is at the ends of her hair behind her. The effect did turn those portions a little blocky, though.
Yes...thanks for the suggestions. The intent was indeed to over process.

The white patch is light on the back and on the top. i'm in process to fix that

up but when i do so i loose detail....also the raw file has varied light

difference in those parts hence the patch. I tried keeping the model within

the shadow of the tree, to get the effect, but bits and parts of hair got

overexposed due to sunlight.
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