She IS lovely. I like the first - but you could have used a bit of a hair light to get a bit more separation from the background.
I personally don't like the hat - but even more WHY did you let her pose against the picture? Kind of a "tree growng out her head" thing. I (vaguely) remember what it's like to have beautiful woman looking back at you in the viewfinder, but you gotta try to remember to check out the rest of the frame, sir. [
But, to be honest, it took several seconds of gazing at that beautiful contenance before I realized she had a frame sticking partially about her head.]
Thanks for shaing.