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Been awhile since I have shot inside
Old 04-05-2008, 03:06 AM   #1 (permalink)
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The lovely Monik, once again graced my lense and lights. C&C please.

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Re: Been awhile since I have shot inside
Old 04-05-2008, 11:45 AM   #2 (permalink)
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She IS lovely. I like the first - but you could have used a bit of a hair light to get a bit more separation from the background.
I personally don't like the hat - but even more WHY did you let her pose against the picture? Kind of a "tree growng out her head" thing. I (vaguely) remember what it's like to have beautiful woman looking back at you in the viewfinder, but you gotta try to remember to check out the rest of the frame, sir. [ But, to be honest, it took several seconds of gazing at that beautiful contenance before I realized she had a frame sticking partially about her head.]

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Re: Been awhile since I have shot inside
Old 04-05-2008, 02:35 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I agree with John about the seperation and pic frame,..and they look a teeny bit over saturated for my taste,..but Monik is lovely for sure, and her pose/expression in #1 are spot on.
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