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Strait from Columbia
Old 03-27-2008, 10:17 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Monik has very little english but a great attitude and designs all her swimwear.

Please give me you constructive critique.



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Re: Strait from Columbia
Old 03-28-2008, 12:25 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Very pretty lady. Was this one strobe? You did a nice job balancing the backlighting from the sun.
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Old 03-28-2008, 03:24 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Ding, you got it, one WL1600 at +2 to my left in each shot to balance the sun from behind and to the right.
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Re: Strait from Columbia
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Colombians tend to have great personalities. The Colombian models I've dealt with have all had a very sexy attitude and are not shy. It makes for great modeling and poses.

As for the shots... She is a very pretty lady and works well as a swimwear model b/c of her figure/proportions. One thing that caught my eye was her mouth. In both shots I would have asked her to close her mouth. It seems a bit odd. She seemed more comfortable and relaxed in the second shot but the first shot is far better in selling the suit.

Where and when was this taken?.... the blue is the sky is very vivid... the sky will render very differently depending on the location and angle of the sun.
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Re: Strait from Columbia
Old 03-28-2008, 10:44 AM   #5 (permalink)
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This was taken last week at Ft clinch state park in Ferandina Beach FL at about 4pm. I pushed the sky darker by filling with light (WL 1600 at +2) and shooting at 1/200 at f11.
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Re: Strait from Columbia
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Beautiful lady and nice shots. The first, I'm not crazy about the effect the squared front has on her hips/thighs. The second shot would have been nicer if she put less weight on the hand and raised her thighs off of her calfs to give improved definition to the legs.

Now this sounds like model critique but I think to be better photographers, we have to be better directors.

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Old 03-31-2008, 09:31 PM   #7 (permalink)
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And if my spanish was better it would have helped, though I didnt catch the square hips. thanks for the C&C
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