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Ana Maria - Second shot
Old 03-27-2008, 03:09 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This is another from a recent portfolio shoot.

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Re: Ana Maria - Second shot
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This is good, I get to see the eye. Between the two, I found the first sexier, of course. The lack of a smile on the first was ok, would have liked to see one here, a little anyway...overall they were great photos, good job

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Re: Ana Maria - Second shot
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Very nicely done. Only two small adjustments (in my worthless opinion). I'd like just a tad more space in front of her and I would clone out that little bit of material hanging down between her legs.


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On the composition...... your right. I normally would have left her looking into the frame. The reason I did this though is b/c she used this with some text in the upper right. In short, it's copy space.

On the fabric.... I agree. I've been on the fence about it. I wanted the dress to drop further than it did.... unfortuntately it was not enough. I'll clone it and see how it looks.

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