*Because she isn't looking at the camera, you have to be careful where the focus is.
*her strap is twisted.
*The pink is fine but what is the focus? her lips? her cleavage? I would have asked her to arrange herself to show a little more cleavage.
*You need to crop it tighter or looser. Cut off more or put her head back.[grin]
*If she had straightened her legs till her feet showed, it would have pushed her ribs out of the image, made her breasts look bigger and made her legs go on forever.
*if it bends bend it (just ask Rolando) those arms could be put almost anywhere and look better than they do. Frame her head with them, Frame her breasts with them etc etc.
*The end of the bench needs to be cloned out its a white line looks bad.
*What is the center of focus? her nose? her shoulder? [shrug]
#3 This is the best of the three
*why? she's looking at the camera and her eyes are the center of focus.
*if she was standing the other way, you wouldn't have thrown those beautiful eyes into the shadows.
*locked elbows, but I've already told you about them.
*You could crop it better, use the rule of thirds and put her outer eye on the cross then crop the bottom and right off till the photo is square and I bet it'll look a lot better.
Hope I didn't sound offensive, you took photos and actually POSTED some which is more than 95% of the so called shooters here do. So even if you feel like I picked them apart, I hope you see what I was saying and can use that next time. I learned a lot from guys (miss you Dave) ripping my images for a long time...