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Old 03-09-2008, 05:48 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi. since I'm an amateur I do not post a lot untill I have something appropriate to show or to have something new for your review...
Here is my new photo from a girl that I just met....
All c&c are welcome.....
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Hi. She's a cute and photogenic gal, if she's single and you're single, marry her! (grin) J/K

Sincerely, she's a gorgeous looking, young lady but the image here doesn't help her. Her pose is not flattering to her stomach along with the fact her clothing bares some of it. I'd have her turn slightly more toward the camera, though avoid direct on hips. Also, her hand looks awfully bright on my monitor and the human eye always goes to the brightest part of the image first, which really should be her face in this image.

Posting and lighting are the two things photographers struggle with the most--and actually the best selling books are on those two topics. This image is an example of that. Now that aside, the cropping and composition I really like. But move that distracting copyright to the side.

Since the Copyright Act of 1976 revision, you don't need a copyright notice, though I recommend you put one on every image, but unobtrusively. IF they are going to steal your images, which mine have been stolen, they will find a way to remove it anyways and web versions can't be used for anything but the web when done right. Thanks, rg sends!

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Old 03-09-2008, 06:51 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Couple of things to watch for...

Girls with hairstyles that "close in" on the face. You have to watch for shadows from the hair, or ask them to keep it back off their faces a bit. Here, just flipping her around so she was facing the light would have helped a lot.

Hand positions. Fists are not really that attractive. Fingers extended and slightly curved is much better.

Body position. Tummy out is a no no as Rolando has already mentioned.

Attention to details. The bra's edge showing at the top's edge. The generally messy hair and especially those stray hairs sticking out. Is that a hair Scunci on her right wrist?

Attractive girl. Do better next time, and you'll have an enthusiastic model.
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Old 03-10-2008, 03:40 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Realy thanks for honest reply I appreciate it.... all taken to be improved with next shoting...
What can I say... I could never learn if I have not received your critiques....

At least the crop and composition is good, this photo was like that directly from the camera without any croping or cutting....
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PS. I have some other photos from same session to show in few days......
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At least the crop and composition is good
About that...

I don't mind it at all, but there are some people here who will say that you shouldn't have cropped off the top of her head. I leave it as a matter of taste and what works for individual shots.

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