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Old 03-02-2008, 10:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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These are from a shoot today. C & C is welcome.

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Re: Jess From Today
Old 03-03-2008, 09:27 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Both shots have background issues (#1 had bars ruinning out of the head and #2 has highlight areas behind head and to right rear that distract). The rail in #2 works, but the rest of the background needed to be more out of focus. Pose #1 makes her look a bit chubby. Pose #2 woriks better. Lighting is a bit flat, so there isn't much dimensionality to the shots. If you were using a ring light, that is typically what happens and you have to use other means to overfcome the flattness. I would crop above the knees in #2. Model has good potential and you should be able to get some stunning photos of her with a little more attention to detail and lighting.

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Old 03-03-2008, 12:48 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Aside from those mentioned, my eyes quickly went to the number one thing I am working on...focus. I can see great detail in the thread work of her sweater, while the eyes look a tad soft. If your using an auto-focus camera, make it focus on her eyes first (push halfway down on the shutter release button and hold), then frame and take the shot (Finish pushing the button all the way down.) Of course, it could just be the compression making look like that.

I agree with Fredrick, she looks like a good one to work with. Good luck!
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