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Old 02-29-2008, 05:44 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 03-05-2008, 04:14 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Any photo comments and or critiques would be greatly appreciated.
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Re: Richaele
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I like the first one. The pose, enticing expression and lighting work for me. I also like the background design and colors with the color of her ensemble. My only nit to pick is that her right hand is a little too prominent and looks a little large.

I don't think that the second shot is as successful. The pose is awkward and the shorts/suspenders don't go with the rest of the scene, particularly with the implied holiday theme of the large Christmas tree balls.
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I'd agree -- the first shot is the best. Again, the background in the second is distracting. The shot would have worked well if there was a tree in place of the bottles, though!
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Re: Richaele
Old 03-07-2008, 04:17 PM   #5 (permalink)
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glad u like the first shot its one of a series and they came out very sexy.
i feel ya about the hand but i've been able to over look it for more pleasant aspects of the photo.

and for the 2nd one again its one of a series but guess that doesn't batter if u guys cant see the series. it was a holiday thing and they styling is all over the place. i was kind of going for a mix mish mash of styles for the shoot. i still think it holds some sexiness in it.

let me add a few more images from the shoot..







thanks again for your feedback.
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Nice except for the second one. Too much tension in her shoulders and the locked elbows and the unfortunate placement of her spread fingers and thumbs combined with the fake, curved nails make her arms/hands look like...

well..

I swear, the first thing that I thought of when I saw the shot was bird legs/feet with claws.

And yes, it is possible to notice other things in the shot besides her prodigious cleavage.

As I said, the rest are very nice.
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