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Old 02-29-2008, 05:43 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Any photo comments and or critiques would be greatly appreciated.
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The second image is the best of the three. Nice shot.

The third image, despite the hard lighting added from camera right, appears to be lacking contrast. The shadows on her face and chest appear muddy on my monitor.
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A pretty model with some good poses and expressions, but I think the images each have room for improvement:

1) Too red and lacks contrast. This could be fixed in post. The blown highlights at the pearls on her wrist and spots on her torso will be tougher.

2) The best of the 3 is cropped poorly, chopping off her fingers and lower legs. The background is distracting and would be better out of focus.

3) As was mentioned above, it lacks contrast. However, I think this one has the potential for most improvement in post.
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thanks alot for taking the time to look at my photos and give some critiques guys. i agree with all the above comments, more could have been done in terms of lighting and composition the location was not my first choice and the gale force winds were not helpful at all lol. more contrast and control of the lighting would have def helped.

below are 3 additional shots from the same shoot i think they are better examples of what i was trying to archive. and if not better different.




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