A lot of photos to comment on ...
1: With a minor contrast enhance, this shot is pretty good, I think.
2: The angle doesn't work for me. I think it's hard to make a deliberate angle work when you have an obvious reference like the doorframe running alongside the edge of the photograph.
The Rest: I see more yellow in the shot than I think I should .. most on the lsat 2. The red shuttered door shot is pretty well balanced. You're obviously throwing a gel on her, but her skin and hair without the gel effect look pretty good. Compare that shot (or the one of her in front of the grey curtain) to your other shots and notice how different her coloration looks. If you intended the yellow photos to be that color, I don't think that works well. Maybe you wanted a sunset kind of look, but if so I'd make it more subtle and more orange than you have it.