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Kara's First Time
Old 01-31-2008, 04:17 PM   #1 (permalink)
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After a year of prodding from her model friends, Kara finally booked a half-day shoot with me yesterday. Since this was her first time in front of the camera, I went easy on her. I tried to capture her in the three standard looks -- Fashion, glamour and casual. Here are a few pix from yesterday.


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Old 01-31-2008, 06:14 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Let's hope she doesn't wait a year for her next shoot. Well done !
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Old 01-31-2008, 07:16 PM   #3 (permalink)
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The last one rocks bigtime! very nice shot there.

The one in the hat I dont really care for the toning much and the one in the yellow, my eye is pulled to her arm pit, so I am not really diggin that one either.

The skin in the first one seems over worked a bit to me.

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Re: Kara's First Time
Old 01-31-2008, 08:37 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Beautiful girl, I like the first one best.
I hope you get the chance to shoot her again.

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Old 02-01-2008, 10:50 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I like the first one best too. A really nice shot of a really beautiful girl.

The one in the casual jeans and hat is a little too low on contrast for my taste.

And the last one pulls her eyes a little too hard over to look into the camera, I think that it may have been better if her face was turned a little more towards the camera. I would also give less prominence to her nose, because it looks in the other photos like she has a very nice nose.

She, and you, sure did a really great job for her first try at this !!! Keep her coming back for more photos.

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I think the reason that number 4 is not the best of the bunch is the old "rule of thirds" thing. My eye is led to her cheek instead of her eye..

But if there ever was a photo that said "trouble" that is the one.

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Love he last shot. She seems much more at ease and relaxed and the expression is most pleasing. Love her dimpled cheek

All of the shots are good but this one stands out.

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