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Old 01-22-2008, 11:07 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I know this is a lot of pictures in one post but I had a hard time narrowing it down to just these. Please let me know what you think. All C&C are welcomed. Also, no retouching has been done as of yet.























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Re: Donna
Old 01-24-2008, 12:55 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I'd rethink the last one...even with some touchup, it just doesn't seem like it's gonna work... IMHO.
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Re: Donna
Old 01-24-2008, 07:21 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I think six is my favorite. I like the way she is falling out of the frame.
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Re: Donna
Old 01-24-2008, 07:32 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: Donna
Old 01-24-2008, 04:02 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I think they most all have some problems. There are so many, that it is hard to say very much about them as I found myself getting lost trying to scroll back and forth and know which photo I was talking about. I think the copyright notice is overkill and distracting. It doesn't add to the photos, it distracts from the photos. The lighting generally works pretty well and you have some interesting ideas, but in most cases little details got in the way. Here is an annotated screen shot of your photos to give little notes on each. But you might want to just post process one and post it (your favorite) and then we can give more details. #1 and #6 have the most potential.


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Re: Donna
Old 01-24-2008, 05:02 PM   #6 (permalink)
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In additon to what has been said... Zoom in.. and step back.
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Re: Donna
Old 01-26-2008, 10:34 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Wow this is great comments, it's gonna help a lot of people (me for sure!) thanks
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Old 01-26-2008, 11:11 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Personally, I like #2 the best even though I think you're a bit off with the composition-- I think you cropped a bit too much of her out. Her pose and expression work very nicely for off-beat cropping but perhaps a bit more of her in the image with a nod to the Rule of Thirds would work?

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Re: Donna
Old 01-26-2008, 11:49 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Thank you . I really appreciate all the help.
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Re: Donna
Old 01-29-2008, 03:37 PM   #10 (permalink)
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I like #6 the most myself. I am sure it could be improved a bit, but I like that she is not dead center in the frame and that helps create a bit of interest. I would probably also clean up under her eyes a bit.
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