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Annalisa from 12/30/07 Please C&C Tahnks
Old 12-31-2007, 12:10 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Please C&C
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Re: Annalisa from 12/30/07 Please C&C Tahnks
Old 12-31-2007, 12:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Here are a few quick notes:

#1 has lots of color cast problems. It looks like you were trying to get some of these color effects, but they didn't work very well and you have some purple fringing around the hair. The cropping/composition has problems especially with the arm on the left side being cropped below the joint. Usually better to crop above the joint. #4 is the best composition but both it and #3 seems to be a bit soft (especially the eyes).

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Re: Annalisa from 12/30/07 Please C&C Tahnks
Old 12-31-2007, 01:15 PM   #3 (permalink)
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These images seem noisy/muddy, some of them a little soft, the DOF probly too short, and lacking detail especially noticeable in the hair. the skin-tone color seems a little off as well there are color cast problems in the pool pics. I'm thinking some of these problems are a result of the processing and some the production. In the pool pics, a bit more control of the gelled BG light would also keep the water natural looking and I think that would improve it. I noticed that, both in the other close-up image (in your other post) and the one here (where you're using fur) the fur comes up and covers much of the models's chins and jaws. You might want to to keep the fur just a bit lower, not covering up so much of their lower faces and not taking up so much of the frames with fur. Just my opinion.
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