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Malice - Dec 2007 Shoot
Old 12-30-2007, 10:30 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey Everyone! Here's a couple of shots from my latest shoot with my friend Malice. As a learning photographer, I would love to hear some critiques on my work. Please feel free to be as blunt as you feel necessary.







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Re: Malice - Dec 2007 Shoot
Old 12-31-2007, 01:37 PM   #2 (permalink)
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not bad ...the second is the better one...
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Re: Malice - Dec 2007 Shoot
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Thanks for your comment.
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Re: Malice - Dec 2007 Shoot
Old 01-01-2008, 05:31 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Happy New Year Sarah,
Your work is really improving. Keep posting!
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Re: Malice - Dec 2007 Shoot
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I think...

the first one would be better with a tighter crop, so that it's just her face.

the second one is really good as is.

the third one would be better if shot full vertical.

not bad overall, keep shooting, keep posting
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Re: Malice - Dec 2007 Shoot
Old 01-01-2008, 09:38 PM   #6 (permalink)
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#1 A tighter crop isnt gonna help because the neck is at a weird angle and the wrinkles there are always gonna be a problem. It makes her face look heavier then it is.

#2 The blur added in post kills it, but it also looks soft and muddy. Play with the original some more and try to get some detail back in her hair.

#3 is the best of the bunch. I am not sure that a vertical crop would make a difference here. I think the better choice would be to get her to the left side of the frame. Think about the rule of thirds.

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Re: Malice - Dec 2007 Shoot
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Okay, I haven't gotten a chance to play around with the first one yet, but here's a couple re-edits from the last two. Thanks for the comments and suggestions thus far, everyone!



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Re: Malice - Dec 2007 Shoot
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Scott's advice was on target and your changes have improved those images quite a bit! Most notably in the sipping wine pic.
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Re: Malice - Dec 2007 Shoot
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Both shots are much improved, Sarah! The recrop is great!
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