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My first shoot with pro hensel lighting, please critique
Old 12-06-2007, 07:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey guys, this is my first shoot with pro hensel lighting. what can I do better? I look for you guys for inspiration and to make me a better shooter. This is Diana and she's not a model but someone who wanted myspace picture. i agreed since I need the practice to make myself better. thank you all.

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Well the lighting seems a bit uneven. The pose is contorted -- it looks like the arm on the left is deformed. Should crop above the knees, not below. The hose should be pulled up so they are not bagging around the area above the knees. Background paper appears to have a dent in it.

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