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Old 12-01-2007, 12:23 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Still working with the white background, trying to work on different lighting setups. All comments and critiques are welcome. All these are preprocessed. This is the way they came from the camera other than putting my mark on them.











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Re: Jenny
Old 12-01-2007, 11:49 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Greetings,

Jenny is a nice looking lady, but you already know that. Now to my comments.

#1. Natural and simple pose, but (as you mentioned) the lighting is a little uneven. I'll admit that lighting a white background evenly without blowing it out is tough.

#2 Interesting story, but I would have gone for a more sinister approach with the background.

#3 A tighter crop would increase the implied tension of this shot. Another thing that may work is taking the shot from the victim's perspective crouching low to give the villain a more sinister look. Perhaps some color instead of the white background. This would make an interesting series. The middle of the background appears to cast a "film" over the two ladies. Could be my monitor though.

#4 Is ok, but the lighting is uneven.

#5 Is ok as well and the lighting is more even, but a touch hot. This could be the look you wanted to achieve though.

#6 The background is more evenly lit, but the subject looks a touch dark.

You're doing better than most of us so please keep shooting!

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Old 12-01-2007, 10:25 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I like the last one best by far, its a little dark on her face but not too bad.

just something about a pretty girl with a sword.

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