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My First Try at this
Old 11-16-2007, 11:52 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This is my first time asking for some thoughts. Please let me know what you think.

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Re: My First Try at this
Old 11-17-2007, 10:05 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I think your composition is great. A couple of the shots look a little soft, but I notice your port is mostly soft to very soft shots, so you probably prefer that look?

#1 has a challenging white hat on a white background, but I think you pulled off the separation very well. I don't like the offwhite coat, with the pure white hat -- but one look at me would confirm I'm no fashionista.

#2 is a bit dark -- a levels adjustment should fix that up. This shot would have benefited from a hair light -- as it's lit currently, her hair lacks detail.

#4 confuses me a bit because I'm not sure if she's going to smell that rose, kiss it or eat it. It could be more clear if her nose was tilted more toward the rose or if her lips were more pursed.

#3 & #5 -- I like them both
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Old 11-26-2007, 09:20 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thank you so much for the tips. I don't know why that one turned out dark on here, it is not that way on the print out or on my computer except when I view it on here.
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Old 11-26-2007, 10:52 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Chuck She is going to eat it. Anything else would be dulll [grin]


I like #4 and #5 great shots.


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