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Outdoor Gothic Fashion/Glamour - C&C Requested
Old 10-30-2007, 11:20 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Fashion Design - Maria of Rock Star Society
Hair - Liz from Extreme Endz
MUA - Sharon from Extreme Endz
Models - Hilary (red), Jessie (brunette) and Jasmine (blonde)

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Re: Outdoor Gothic Fashion/Glamour - C&C Requested
Old 10-30-2007, 01:14 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Of the 3, the last one seems more interesting. I do not see any connection in # 1 of the models to the location, each other or the reason of the pose. I am sure it was a low light location and all natural. This is difficult to shoot and get good colors. It sems they are a little flat for it and suffer a little color cast (white balance).

I keep seeing this a lot...modeling does not mean you look at the camera all the time. I suggest connecting them to the location in an interesting manner and to each other, if you can. Also, try to add mystery, contradiction or ambiguity.

(the old rule at GG here...)

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Re: Outdoor Gothic Fashion/Glamour - C&C Requested
Old 11-12-2007, 04:31 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Yep - I would agree with Bonner - the light in 1 falls off too quickly from the closest model to the second, and the third model is almost insignificant in the background (no disrespect to the model's efforts BTW...)

The second could have been cropped a bit of the left and top to bring her out...

But the third image is one that I absolutely love! The lighting levels really bring her out, and her pose effectively fills the image. Well done!

Oh - and I really love the Gothic imagery - it's something I would love to get into.

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Re: Outdoor Gothic Fashion/Glamour - C&C Requested
Old 11-12-2007, 11:21 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Good attempt. The lighting does look flat. Direct flash? The posing of the models does nothing for me on the first shot. The second shot has some uninteresting dead space on the top left. Maybe another angle would have been better. The last shot was the best of the three.

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