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Old 10-23-2007, 02:52 PM   #1 (permalink)
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First time to work with her, lots of fun, easy to work with.

shot on location, natural light.

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Old 10-23-2007, 10:34 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like the first one the most. I like how the hair plays into the picture. I have to think however that if the skater girls really dressed like I think we would all want to take up the sport just for the scenery.
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Old 10-24-2007, 09:13 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Its funny, skater girls actually dress like that except they tend to wear long sleves (no matter how hot) and pads. Skater groupies dress a lot like this shoot too. (did homework)

Lots of views, one comment.

I have "issues" with a couple of them, posted to see if any of you guys/girls had the same issues.
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Old 10-25-2007, 12:03 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I dislike the way the hair works in the first image - i think to my eye is left with the impression she has a far from symmetrical face - which is not the case - it is just heavier one side than the other. Part of this illusion comes from the angle the hair takes across her forehead. Hence i think this much hair detracts from her best possible look.

the second is much better but the high placement of the tight cuff on the tee shirt leaves her arm looking very thick and since her shoulder is a focal point in the image you may be drawing too much attention to this.

The third one is kool - i might have drawn her closer so you were shooting at sharper angle but that is a matter of personal preferences. Good job overall - she is probably very pleased and she should be.

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Old 10-25-2007, 09:30 AM   #5 (permalink)
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thanks for the comments. that first shot "the hair" is her favorite. My main wish is that I could have gotten more light into her face on that last one but I was holding the camera at the ground trying to get a different view.

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