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this is sarah ALL comments and critiques welcome
Old 10-20-2007, 05:48 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 10-20-2007, 07:22 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very Nice. Number two and three are really sweet!
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Two and four work best for me. The rough rope texture against the skin sets #2 off.
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Old 10-21-2007, 08:08 AM   #4 (permalink)
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2 & 4 are great shots! The post in both is very well done!
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Not being Devil's advocate, but I like number one. I like how you've warmed up her skin and maintained a goos amount of texture. Her smile works for me too. The crop (see elbow), the hair in her face may be a put off (flaw) for some, and her eyes look a touch soft to me, but I still like it anyway. Your other shots are nice as well, but these are the opinions of a non-pro shooter trying to get better.

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Not being Devil's advocate, but I like number one. I like how you've warmed up her skin and maintained a goos amount of texture. Her smile works for me too. The crop (see elbow), the hair in her face may be a put off (flaw) for some, and her eyes look a touch soft to me, but I still like it anyway. Your other shots are nice as well, but these are the opinions of a non-pro shooter trying to get better.

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Personally i like the devils advocate - or at least the articulate comments. I agree with you in many ways. The lighter photoshop work on the skin in the first one was necessary for expediency because of the volume of hair in front of her face.

I actually do a lot of smoothing of the skin in order to achieve the amount of contrast and saturation i am after, which typically has a very harsh impact on facial features.

RE: the crop - loved the facial expression - the best of he shoot - her elbow cannot be a part of the shot - it would look too huge so it must be cropped out of the shot - but i did that with the camera not after the fact.

Allopinions are important to me - no matter what level of experience. I have actually never thought about impressing another photographer with my work - i shoot for my client and no one else but gain the ability to better critique my own work while visiting this site. So i very much appreciate your comments.

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