Karen

[SFJ Photography]

This is from a few months ago. I know it's not the best shot ever, but I thought i'd post it to see what others think could have been better.

[BobEdens]

Its hard to comment on this photo, too many things.
BUT SOMEBODY NEEDS TO. I'm no pro, but have learned a lot here by people tearing my work apart. I feel us intermediate guys should step in when we can. We can't let the brunt of the commenting fall on only a few. We need the pros here, so us hobby guys need to step up and say what we think.

These are my opinions and don't forget opinions are like asses, everybody has one and only yours doesn't stink.

1. the photo is too dark you need light on the walls or her from behind.
2. Why is she all bent over? She's a big girl, you don't need to compress her. She's going to have great curves all streached out so why not stand her up?
3. and one thing that bothers me is her eye's are closed. She's all beautiful looking, I want her looking at me. (the camera)
4. The ceiling cuts the photo funny, looks like bad planning.
5. lots of lines, which is a good thing but the focal point is her knees not her "more attractive" parts.. [grin]