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Old 10-10-2007, 09:48 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Couple from a recent shoot
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Old 10-11-2007, 11:02 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Here are my thoughts -- as always, just my opinions. I've tried the girl & motorcycle thing myself, but have never been successful with it. Here's one of my first attempts from 1993. I didn't realize how much I hated her shoes until after I got the slides developed!



#1 - I'd suggest softening the sunlight with a sheet or moving the set into the shade. I'd also say it's cropped wrong -- crop out more of the windscreen in favor of keeping her foot whole.

$2 - The crop is low and the shadow (of a tree limb?) that cuts down her face is distracting.

#3 - I like it! The angle might be distracting...but I like the way she leans into the photograph.

#4 - Beautiful background (looks polarized?) but the interior is dark.
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Old 10-11-2007, 03:43 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comments!
The last image was shot using fill, and wasn't too dark until I uploaded it.

She wanted to shoot on the bike. If I got the bike, she was too far away to see well, if I got her right, you couldn't tell she was sitting on a bike..

[grin] but we had a great time, for TFCD thats really important.
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Old 10-11-2007, 06:57 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Thanks for the comments!
The last image was shot using fill, and wasn't too dark until I uploaded it.

She wanted to shoot on the bike. If I got the bike, she was too far away to see well, if I got her right, you couldn't tell she was sitting on a bike..

[grin] but we had a great time, for TFCD thats really important.
As you can see from my shot, I had the same issue with deciding where to crop. I chose to crop the bike and keep the girl -- but the bike wasn't anything special anyway.

Looks like a nice place to shoot. The old wood building on the right edge of the last photo would make a great background.
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