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Been a while since I put an image up for C&C
Old 09-23-2007, 08:21 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Let me have it...



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Re: Been a while since I put an image up for C&C
Old 09-23-2007, 08:39 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very nice. I love her expression and pose. Some people will complain about the top of her head being cut off, but it doesn't bother me too much here. My only serious quibble is with her left hand. The way her fingers are hidden showing just her knuckles and wrist is not very attractive, particularly since her hand looks much older than the rest of her.
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Re: Been a while since I put an image up for C&C
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Lots to like about this and ti is an attractive images but i am constantly looking for the very best rather than jsut good.

The issues is see that keep it from being better are:

The draping of the outfit around her waist effectively thickens her in that area from what i imagine is a wonderful body. As well she is pushing her tummy out where we can see it - and this adds to the effect.

As was mentioned the fingers are cut off by the material ad leaves a aged looking hand due the the blood vessels. You could soften the blood vessels with photoshop, but you still need the fingers to give her arm and hand length and reduce the sense of thickness.

NOTE all of these issues are below her elbow - if this is cropped at her elbow and is sharp enough it may be outstanding shot of a truly gorgeous face..


I am sure you have much better shots from this shoot - and would love to see more.

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