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Old 09-02-2007, 10:23 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I just wanted to ask the powers that be (anybody who feels like replyling) your thoughts on these images. Thanks in advanced.

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Old 09-02-2007, 10:48 PM   #2 (permalink)
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OK, on both images, the lighting is not flattering to the model. Image 1 the model has little connection to the camera, it looks like you just caught her doing something unrelated to the shoot.

Image 2 the pose is extremely unflattering to her and makes her butt and thighs look super-size. Her face is not lit at all, she doesn't have a sexy or sultry look, just looks like you caught her not even trying to look hot.

They are more snapshots then photographs.

Go back to the drawing board and see what you can do, I know you can do better.

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In the first photo, she doesn't seem to be looking at the camera. It costs a lot but its still a good image.

the second photo I understand what you were going for but by not having any light on the model's face, you missed the shot.

My opinion, take it for what it's worth.

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Second image pose and expression looks good to me, it just lacks as mentionted some fill in the face area. Contact a buddy and have them hold a reflector or foam core next time. I am quite sure they wouldn't mind being on set with her.
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