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Photoshoot with Katrine
Old 08-22-2007, 10:00 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I would love to hear what you all think about my shoot of Katrine.
Any thoughts on how to improve would be greatly appreciated.

I have thick skin, so let me have it ; )

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Re: Photoshoot with Katrine
Old 08-22-2007, 11:26 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Maybe it's my eyesight this morning but, but the angle of the shot and the difference in the skin tones between her neck and those of her face almost make the image appear as if the head has been pasted over the body.

Next time try to make sure that the MUA evens out the skin ones.
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Re: Photoshoot with Katrine
Old 08-22-2007, 11:33 AM   #3 (permalink)
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i think that backlight is a little low, at least for my tastes it is. if it was raised a bit so that the light struck the center of the back of her head, the highlights around her hair would be more evenly distributed, from the top of her head down the hair that's being blown back. just my opinion.
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Re: Photoshoot with Katrine
Old 08-22-2007, 11:35 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice use of backlighting to bring out her hair. Looks like you might have done that and used reflectors in the front.

It looks like the photo is a little soft or out of focus.

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It looks soft to me and I agree with JimmyD about raising the backlight just a tad. At least you had a pretty girl in front of you. Keep shotting and post some more!

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