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Old 08-20-2007, 07:58 PM   #1 (permalink)
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What do you think guys? Comments, critiques, critical acclaim? All input is welcome.

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I would have included the whole elbow to camera right. Maybe repositioning yourself lower and moving your model back would have excluded the horisontal line between the gravel (?) and the grass which I found distracting.
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Pretty girl .. but don't take this the wrong way but it really just resembles a snapshot. There's very little impact to the image. The lighting is flat and uninteresting, the model is kind of just standing there, and the clothing is very "every day".

There's nothing wrong with having one or two of those elements in a photograph, but you have to make something stand out. Give the viewer a reason to look at your image.

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