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Old 08-19-2007, 09:51 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Melissa
Old 08-20-2007, 01:18 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hair light seems to be missing a bit and is a little too hot on top and spills onto the shoulders. Lighting is a little too harsh for my taste.

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Re: Melissa
Old 08-22-2007, 10:17 AM   #3 (permalink)
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The lightspill onto the shoulders does not bother me. I actually think it adds to your photo.

I agree that the light on the face is a bit to harsh.

Photoshops spot removal tool would take care of the moles and give better skin.
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Re: Melissa
Old 08-22-2007, 11:36 AM   #4 (permalink)
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