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Old 08-10-2007, 08:57 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 08-10-2007, 10:19 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I really like the ......... ummm layout, the space used, the composition of the photograph. The pose looks distressing to the model...in fact it looks like a pose, you know something you told her to do, and she did exactly what you told her. I recommend that you keep working with this subject and you and her will become more comfortable with eachother and you will produce some really nice photographs.
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Old 08-11-2007, 12:56 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Looks a bit posed, try again and get the model relaxed. Do a series and get her to lossen up.

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Re: Jacky
Old 08-11-2007, 10:39 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Actually I told her what I was looking for and she posed herself, but thanks for playing. If she'd get any looser, she would have fallen apart. This girl was very easy to work with.









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Re: Jacky
Old 08-11-2007, 02:55 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Her left hand is at a bit of an awkward angle in the top one, but other than that both of these are much better than your original post, as far as her pose and expression are concerned.
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Old 08-14-2007, 01:46 AM   #6 (permalink)
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I agree, love #3.

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Old 08-26-2007, 10:29 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Nice model.I think that the #2 is best.
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