My First Model Shoot, Any Critique?

[danstone]

My First Model Shoot, Any Critique? 

My First Model Shoot, Any Critique? 

My First Model Shoot, Any Critique? 

Hi all,
This is my first post, bit of critique would be greatly appreciated, i know its not true glamour tho, this was my first model shoot and it was taken in my kitchen, learned a lot on the day and hope to improve next time.

I'm unhappy with the wall/Background in the last shot it jst bleaches away into nothing, needs some PS work over the next day or 2!
Many Thanks
Dan