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A princess - Kimberly - was a rare treat
Old 07-03-2007, 02:06 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Any and all critiques and comments welcome

i cannot be objective immediately after some shoots

She is very sweet and would very much like a second opinion on her potential - given this is her first shoot of this nature.





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Re: A princess - Kimberly - was a rare treat
Old 07-03-2007, 01:52 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I think Kimberly is quite nice and my favs are #3 and #5.

1. The pose is nice, but her eyes seem a bit soft.
2. The eyes look sharp but the pose is not that great.
3. I like the pose for it's simplicity and her eyes look sumptuous.
4. Not bade, but I prefer a darker background and lighter foreground to create contrast.
5. Though her eyes seem soft, I do like the area that is in focus.

Overall great photos of a beautiful woman...if we could all be so lucky! :-(

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Re: A princess - Kimberly - was a rare treat
Old 07-08-2007, 01:43 PM   #3 (permalink)
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thanks for your thoughts - i am surprise a post can be seen by so far 323 people and the vast bulk of them simply enjoy the shot without offering any comments at all.

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Re: A princess - Kimberly - was a rare treat
Old 07-08-2007, 02:13 PM   #4 (permalink)
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the photoshop work is absolutely horrible.

the model does not have good teeth so I would keep her mouth closed.

#1 looks way out of focus.

# 2 is an un-natural pose the way the garment is hanging down.

#3 looks OK but focus and photoshop alterations make it hard to tell.

# 4 teeth and lighting from below not the greatest.

# 5 my favorite of the bunch, but not sharp. Perhaps she would have looked good with eyes closed.

Now aren't you happy you asked for more comments?

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Re: A princess - Kimberly - was a rare treat
Old 07-08-2007, 02:31 PM   #5 (permalink)
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the photoshop work is absolutely horrible.

the model does not have good teeth so I would keep her mouth closed.

#1 looks way out of focus.

# 2 is an un-natural pose the way the garment is hanging down.

#3 looks OK but focus and photoshop alterations make it hard to tell.

# 4 teeth and lighting from below not the greatest.

# 5 my favorite of the bunch, but not sharp. Perhaps she would have looked good with eyes closed.

Now aren't you happy you asked for more comments?

glenn

Yes i am happy to receive comments and critiques.

I do not post stuff to be told it is wonderful -i post it to get real

Now don't you feel better getting it off your chest

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Re: A princess - Kimberly - was a rare treat
Old 07-08-2007, 03:46 PM   #6 (permalink)
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#5 is my favorite by far

#1 As well as being out of focus the pattern on her bra that can be seen through her jumper distracts me.

#2 Doesn't look like a very natural pose to me, although it did make me look at it for a while as I couldn't figure out how she was standing

#3 This looks nice but I feel it could have done with a catchlight in her eyes to bring them to life a bit more.

#4 I like the idea but find the background way to bright. If you were able to raise your shutter speed you could have darkened outside down ( assuming that you were using flash ). I also find the pink ribbon coming from her left hand to the bottom corner of the picture distracting.

#5 As I said this is my favorite although I think if her face isn't to sharp I would be inclined to do a tight crop on her legs / bum / torso and forgot about including her head.

Well done for posting these images instead of keeping them on your hard drive and pretending your good like me !!!!
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Re: A princess - Kimberly - was a rare treat
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