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Two outside photos for C&C-appreciate it
Old 07-02-2007, 12:05 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi,
here are two latest photos of mine.
What I would like to have your opinions over these matters:
The first photo is like directly from camera with only Levels changing for contrast. Do you think that I should do a little more PSD, I do not know what to do more.... is it good enough like this.... I would appreciate your input.


The second photo I changed since I was not sure what to do more like on the first one so I finished the second one like it is.
Do you have any suggestions...


The model seams to me did well so it is my turn to finish it well.

My biggest questions are about the colors, contrast,exposure..... the composition is on the second place.
Thanks in advance.
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Re: Two outside photos for C&C-appreciate it
Old 07-02-2007, 12:37 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Before you really consider a lot of Photoshop work, you need to work on the basic composition of the photos. The poses look a bit awkward, and the scenes have clutter and there are little detail problems in each. For example, the way the guitar cord wraps around her leg, placement of the amplifier, black hair of head blends into trees at top, big splotch of white sky up to the right (underexposed) and poor expression on model's face in #1. People playing a guitar are usely animated and exited and show some emotion on the face.

Take a look at some magazine photos of girls with guitars and see how they're posed and how the shots are organized and then at first try to imitate those. Don't bother with lots of Photoshop work until you have well composed and exposed shots to start with.

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