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Old 06-30-2007, 12:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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It's a real call from her son, she's a nurse so her phone rang a lot.
She wasn't really prepared for glamour, and will be back in a few weeks.
Help me improve guys! I know there's lots of room for it, I see everything I shoot!

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The first thing that I noticed is that the crop is off. Too much dead space over her head. It appears to be a glamourous type of image but the phone makes it seem like it might have been an attempt on an editorial style of picture.

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As mentioned it's an awkward crop. Also the pose is a little to square to the camera, seems a touch overexposed and the diaonal through her head from the background is a bit distracting.
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Old 06-30-2007, 09:45 PM   #4 (permalink)
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You sir, are right! Not so square next time, and I will fix the background!
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I will pay much closer attention to cropping when editing. Please explain Rule 10 or direct me. Thx.
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I will pay much closer attention to cropping when editing. Please explain Rule 10 or direct me. Thx.
The glamour1 rule 10 is like a matter of etiquette from the person who makes a critique on your original posted image to show whether or not we have some idea as to what we are talking about. Anyone can give advice on another persons picture but you might want to know if you can learn from what was said.
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