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WOW! I actually have a few new images
Old 06-26-2007, 11:48 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Well, I'd love to hear some feedback on a couple of new images from a few weeks back.

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Re: WOW! I actually have a few new images
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My $.02:

1) Cute girl, the pose isn't bad and she's got a nice smile. But move in and fill the frame with her. The background is busy and distracting. Open up the aperture for a shallower depth of field to blur the background and make her stand out more. Might also want to move her further away from the background to put it even more OOF.

2) Biggest issue for me is the crop which makes her arm/shoulder look really thick. (We know from the first photo that it isn't really that way.) Include some empty space under the arm and to her left so that the eye can see where her body ends. Other than that, her expression is just kind of lifeless and the eyes are really dark. Bounce some light in there!

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