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From Thursday for C&C Please
Old 06-17-2007, 01:27 AM   #1 (permalink)
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A few new ones (finally) both on the beach and in the studio. I look forward to your reviews and opinions.

Many Thanks in advance!

UPDATE: June 20
Image 2 - Some PP applied
Image 3 - different image posted.

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All are pretty much out of camera - RAW converted to JPG and slightly sharpened.

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Re: From Thursday for C&C Please
Old 06-18-2007, 04:29 PM   #2 (permalink)
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#1 seems like she's a little underexposed. Some fill would help this one.
#2 looks like it will be nice after your pp.
#3's a nice pose, lighting looks okay after levels but being so close to the background doesn't work for me.
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Re: From Thursday for C&C Please
Old 06-20-2007, 08:53 PM   #3 (permalink)
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#1 I'm not a big fan of low tone/low contast images. It's flat. Why is she up to her hemline in the water? If she were holding sandals or shoes then we would know she's wading or if she were holding a flower it would make for a sappy but (women dig it) romantic image.

#2 Watch the hair placement. Her forehead is distracts from her barely visible eyes. In a glamour photo where the breasts aren't the focal point of the image, the face and eye contact should be.

#3 This is a throw away image. Everything is wrong with this one. Her knee is pointing right at me, her right arm is missing until we see her finger touching her leg, the neck tendons are way to prevalent, her hair is a mess, and the abrupt elbow angle leading to an aliens claw hand but your most egregious error was not to ironing that background.

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Re: From Thursday for C&C Please
Old 06-20-2007, 10:01 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Thanks for the honest feedback. I've replaced #2 with the same image after some PP, and replaced #3 altogether. I'm still not sure about #1 - I might try some different PP on it later if I have time, but the one I'm looking at right now is even worse to me than the one I posted.

I appreciate the chance to learn!

Excellent sample there Rick! I love Rule 10.

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