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My first photo in the forum
Old 06-10-2007, 03:42 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Good evening. This is my first post. I've not post before because my knowledge of english language is very limited This is a picture I've taken a few days ago. I am a newbie in photo and more than newbie with studio lighting. Regards, Pelayo.



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I think the photo has some interesting possibilities but it also has elements of confusion. Since the arm on the left is more or less hidden we don't know whether it is holding the music sheets or whether they have been dropped into the scene. Thematically it is unclear what the photo is about. Also the hair seems to blend into the background and I think would work better with a hair light or background light to give better separation. But, still, I like the photo and see lots of potential for future work on this theme.

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