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Eden, In a dark alley....
Old 06-07-2007, 07:29 AM   #1 (permalink)
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OK guys, here are a few, what should I do next time? (In your opinion)

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Re: Eden, In a dark alley....
Old 06-09-2007, 08:17 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I really like that you put thought into the images. Good props, good set, you just failed to think about what makes it pretty/interesting.

You're on your way to stunning images. Stop for a moment and pay attention to what's stylish, how to evolve your character, how to better position the body so it doesn't look chubby. You're on your way... now details, details, details.
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280 views and one opinion?
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280 views and one opinion?
Its actually the quality of the comments you get, rather than the quantity!

Sometimes posting 4 photos and asking "what should I do next time" is going to make it less likely that many will respond. Overall you've got some interesting ideas in your pictures but I don't think the overall execution really came off. As Christian said you need to think about the little details of the shots to exploit the ideas you've presented. Pick out the shot of the 4 you like best and tell us why you like it and what your goals for the shot was and then ask the same question about that shot and you'll probably get better results as it will allow a more focused response.

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