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2 Glamour Photos from my first shoot
Old 06-06-2007, 10:22 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: 2 Glamour Photos from my first shoot
Old 06-07-2007, 12:43 AM   #2 (permalink)
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The most obvious problem with these shots is lack of attention to detail. #1 has weeds growing up out behind the model that are very distracting. #2 is the strange pink thing in the background which instantly attracts attention. The poses are awkward, particularly the bottom of the foot showing in #2.

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Re: 2 Glamour Photos from my first shoot
Old 06-07-2007, 07:38 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Welcome neighbor,

The only thing I'd add to RFS' comments is to also watch the focus. The eyes aren't sharp while other parts of the image are. The eyes should almost always be sharp in these types of images.

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Re: 2 Glamour Photos from my first shoot
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Yup... focus might help.
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Re: 2 Glamour Photos from my first shoot
Old 06-10-2007, 04:13 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I think that these photos have a important lack of focus. Not a nice skin tone also anoys me. If you can, try to repeat these pictures and pay atention to the focusing.Regards, Pelayo.
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