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Old 04-03-2007, 07:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A great shoot with a lovely lady, Savanna on the beach.
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Old 04-03-2007, 11:39 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like the first one. Great eyes. The eyes get a bit lost in the others though.

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Old 04-04-2007, 09:44 AM   #3 (permalink)
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"I like the first one. Great eyes. The eyes get a bit lost in the others though.

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Agreed. She's lovely, and the first one shows her eyes best.
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Old 04-05-2007, 07:58 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I think your second picture is not so good. Her smile is more like a rictus and make her look mean. Not the best light for showing her beautiful eyes.

On your third, again the light was too high, or her face too low, to catch a bit of light in her eyes. Her neck or her head seems in a bit forced position.

On the last one I miss her left arm that it could be balance a bit more her body.

I hope I didn't hurt your feelings.
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I had a question about #1. There is a weird dark block on the left side of the pic. It is in the water but you have a perfectly straight line going up and down and then to the right up to the model. Is it a remnant from the marquee tool?

She's a pretty model and that shot would have been my favorite. IMHO, the eyes in the last 3 need a little more light. Especially with her gorgeous eye color.

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