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Girls and Bikes for C&C Please
Old 03-22-2007, 02:55 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Girls and Bikes for C&C Please
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Overall, I think the lighting and general composition are fine. I like the idea of the non-traditional mix of formal wear and bikes. The last one is the most successful of the group. My only comment on that one would to be more careful with posing and cropping to keep from getting the "amputee look" by croppping the model's right leg mid-calf. Show limbs full length or crop above the knee/elbow. The second shot calls for a liberal dose of Photoshop to clean up the dirty paper. The first shot has several model posing issues. She looks bored/unhappy. The lines on her neck caused by turning her head are fairly severe. Her left shoulder is sticking up. It should have been more relaxed. The handle bar is having an unfortunate impact on the work of the hairstylist.

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Re: Girls and Bikes for C&C Please
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Thanks Rob. I very much appreciate your comments.

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