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Old 03-21-2007, 04:48 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 04-05-2007, 09:34 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very nice model and nice shot.
I think you should crop a bit more on the top, so that her eyes come in 5th on vertical. Probably, a bit more editing would make a better skin. Now it looks a bit... (I don't know how to express myself better) dirty.
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Thanks for your comments Claudiu. I think I was relying on gausian blur here but it didn't do as much as I thought it would.

Please explain what you mean by "so that her eyes come in 5th on vertical?" I am familiar with the idea of rule of thirds, but not this.
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Rule of thirds is not the only one rule for composition. Next rule speaks about fifths. You know already that placing in the middle isn't good, that's mean raport 1/2, but next bad raport is 1/4. Her eyes are now placed on 1/4.
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