Please Critique

[dorbata]

Please critique this image. I think I should have improved the lighting on the leg.

[R_Fredrick_Smith]

I see no real reason for cropping off the top of the head. The leg looks okay to me. I think it would work better with the torso twisted a bit more toward the camera.

Re: Please Critique 

Cheers,
rfs

[J Diaz]

I'm agree with mr Smith cropping the head was a bad idea you need to twisted the torso more.

[Mchilly]

Yeah I agree with them, but I think it would be much better to put a little light on the legs. Much sexy to look at if the torso is twisted more :-)

[kgphoto]

The leg needs to show some fall off or edge shadow transference to show its shape. Turn her body more to camera and then you may have to move the light so you don't shin so flatly on it. skimming her body with the light will make it look better, and make sure to tell her to suck it in.

I also agree that the head crop doesn't look right.

[Claudiu]

Contrary with all the others, I think is nothing wrong with the crop on the top. What bothers me here is the double shadow of her arm and I think her belly is a bit heavy. Of course, is a matter of taste. As it is, your picture reminds me a bit of Rubens women.

Her gesture has sense in this way, if you turn her body to the camera as others suggested, you'll lose the efect of her gesture.

If I was in your shoes, I would edit the shadow and using liquify in photoshop, I would make her a bit less heavy on the belly area. That's all.