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What should I've done differently
Old 02-26-2007, 11:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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What should I have done differently on this image from my first photo shoot last week? I appreciate your C&C.

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Re: What should I've done differently
Old 02-27-2007, 04:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I would have turned her hips so they're parallel with the camera, it makes them look wider than they are.

I would crop it a little higher to not show the g-string at all, or back up a bit to show all of it.

I think the pearls are a nice choice with what she's wearing.

However the wood shingled wall doesn't fit.

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I would work on getting a better expression on the face. She looks like she's about to snarl. I'd also be careful with bunched up fabric in the waist area as it risks making the model look thicker in the mid section.

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Good idea guys. Thanks for your input.
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