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A new model for me - Tayla
Old 02-24-2007, 07:39 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: A new model for me - Tayla
Old 02-24-2007, 08:15 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very nice. The top photo is excellent.
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Re: A new model for me - Tayla
Old 02-25-2007, 01:10 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Lovely girl. I, too, prefer the first image.
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Re: A new model for me - Tayla
Old 02-28-2007, 11:37 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thanks for the comments - would love to see some more ideas about how to impove them but i am appreciative - thanks again
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Re: A new model for me - Tayla
Old 03-01-2007, 12:06 AM   #5 (permalink)
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#1 is fine.

#2 needs a contrast adjustment of about +10 contrast.

#3 needs about a +10 contrast and -15 brightness on the brightness/contrast adjustment. It also needs to be sharpened, try Smart Sharpen > 150% > 1 pixel >lens blur. Hope that helps.

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Ok, you wanted some critique so I'll offer some, hope it helps.

#1 - I'm not fond of the crop. Either include more or my preference would be a tighter crop. You have a very nice capture here but I think I'd get rid of everything but the face and hair.

#2 -I like the pose and the crop but the focus is off. Her breasts are more in focues than any other part. Her eyes should be the focal point, unless you wanted the breasts to be the focal point. Frankly, they will get attention without being the focal point. Also the hot spot on her right cheek is distracting. All of this can be improved but I'm not sure the focus can be fixed completely.

#3 - Needs more contrast and a little sharpening for my taste.

All are very close and good efforts but as I'm learning, the devil is in the details.

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thanks to both of you

RE:second shot Focus - i checked it out - although the breasts may look to have been the focus of this shot it seems to be the brim of the hat that was caught with autofocus. I actually have difficulty seeing without glassses so I use atuofocus exclusively.

thanks again for your the usefull insight.
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