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Three of Shawna
Old 02-08-2007, 09:51 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Worked with Shawna recently. Yes, the tats are real. What a great model to work with. Comments welcome.Click for larger version
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Old 02-08-2007, 10:56 AM   #2 (permalink)
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NIce tats! I really like the roses.

#1 - the pose is ok - a little stiff armed maybe, but ok. There is a fair amount of detail in the dress, but the hair really needs more light (hair light, kicker, maybe both).

#2 - the skin tone is a bit light, compared to the other two, the tiara blends right into the background, and again, needs a hair light. Also, there is a "hot spot" on her forehead that really highlights the wrinkles. I get that she's suppose to be thinking, but I think I'd tone it down a bit (burn down the highlight and lightly smooth the wrinkles so they're not quite so deep). Probably a personality deficiency on my part, but every time I look at it my eyes jump right to the hot spot.

#3 - the white blouse is great. good detail - not blown out. but... it's the hair again - really needs a hair light - no detail and blends right into the background. I looked at it for a couple of minutes before I realized she's wearing a hat. It really needs some light to separate it from the background. Ok, part of that could be my not so great monitor. On the other hand I love the expression in this one.

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Old 02-08-2007, 11:22 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Intersting subject, wrong light. You should get stuff grainy, shadowy, and urban looking. She's not meant for the cutesy portrait look....a lot of opportunity with this one, just get her in the right setting and mood.

Think black clothes, brick walls, industrial, dark mood.

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The black background and suspenders started out as a take off from the opening of Clockwork Orange, with the hair and hat blending in with the background.
Yes, I do need to set up a hair light, though.

Jim - We had originally started looking for the dark, moody settings & are waiting for the right place and warm weather.

I'll keep trying.
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Old 02-08-2007, 08:08 PM   #5 (permalink)
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In that case - forget everything I said about #3. The very first thing I thought of when I was it was A Clockwork Orange!
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Me too! (on #3)

And I like the juxtaposition of the cute outfit in #2 with her tatoos. It's so usual to see heavily tatooed models made up as "tough". It's neat to see her look so cute.
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