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Lesley
Old 02-06-2007, 11:22 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi,

I found the critiques in this forum so helpful, so I posted one of my works for your critique...


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Re: Lesley
Old 02-06-2007, 10:45 PM   #2 (permalink)
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First the whole image looks soft. I can't really tell where you're focusing. You really want to make sure the eyes are one of, if not the sharpest thing in the image.

Second you have hot spots on her shoulder and her nose. Plus her white top draws my eye away from her face.

I'm not crazy about the pose but I'm not sure exactly why. Specific poses are largely a matter of personal opinion.

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