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My first Upload to Glamour1
Old 01-29-2007, 04:13 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi everyone, after having posted just some questions, I finally post a pic, so please I really look forward to receiving C&C



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Re: My first Upload to Glamour1
Old 01-29-2007, 08:04 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi David,

Nice first post. Model is very pretty, has a great smile and I like the pose. You did a nice job of capturing the eyes and the smile overall. The only thing I would work on is the hotspot on her right shoulder and to a lesser degree, the right side of her face. Light(s) could have been pulled .3 to .5 stop IMO.
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Re: My first Upload to Glamour1
Old 01-29-2007, 08:19 AM   #3 (permalink)
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David,

I also think you have a good shot here and like the angle and composition of the shot. I agree that the hot-spot in the photo on here shoulder ans right side of the face could be better but a good shot. I also noticed what might be her necklace down on her arm. It pulled my eye. A slight rotation or camera adjustment and that is gone.

BTW, you have posted one more than me. Congrats.

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Old 01-29-2007, 09:54 PM   #4 (permalink)
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You have a nice warm toned image here but in addition to the other two replies I would watch out for those neck wrinkles.

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So like everyone else, I think this image is really cool. I love the contrast and natural expression of the model's eyes and lips. The only way I could think to improve the image, beyond what those others suggested, is to angle the models shoulders against her chin. Awesome, nonetheless. Keep it up. Brian
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