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Old 01-28-2007, 11:02 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Have added in two more pics what do you think.



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Well #2 is too large to view all at once, so I'll skip over it. You'll want to try to keep the size of any images that you include in a post to no more than 600 pixels high and no more than 700 pixels wide. Easiest way to assure this is the case, is to just upload the photos to your G1 portfolio and then post them from there using the Images link and they'll automatically be the right size.

#1 is poorly posed and cropped. You should usually not crop below a joint, but above it. Here you have cropped three of the limbs in such a way as to give a strange feel to the photo. Lighting is bland and flat and the model doesn't look very interested in the proceedings. You might want to look in some popular magazines or photo books for posing ideas and basic ideas on composition.

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gnefahk, RFS is right on with his technical critique. On a positive note however, you nailed the exposures and I like the feel of the first image. The only other problem with the first I see is the shadows on the sofa which is a little distracting. Keep posting....
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