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Critique please (my first post here)
Old 01-12-2007, 12:07 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Critique please (my first post here)
Old 01-12-2007, 02:36 AM   #2 (permalink)
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the image is kinda off-topic. the crop is unusual but not necessarily in a bad way. it's somewhat commercial, the image that is. i find the hand on the head distracting.
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Eye like it.
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Re: Critique please (my first post here)
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Thanks for the critique sir, I can agree with almost everything you just said expect that the image was never cropped
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Thanks for the critique sir, I can agree with almost everything you just said expect that the image was never cropped
fair enough. make that, the framing is unusual but not necessarily in a bad way.
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The cut off hand bothers me. The attention keeps going up there.. I am rather sure the part of the hand almost center top is the heel, but with the cropping it just looks awkard, in myy opinion. To me, if you scroll up until the hand dissappears it is a better shot.
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