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Old 12-31-2006, 07:37 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I would like some constructive critiques please. I'm new at this and any comments on what I can do better would be welcome.
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Old 01-01-2007, 12:10 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Well, I guess I'm not going to be much help. I like this image. The lighting looks good, good use of negative space (IMO), and nice job on cropping. I love her eyes.

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Old 01-01-2007, 09:46 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I agree with Bill, I like it too.
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Old 01-01-2007, 01:39 PM   #4 (permalink)
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great shot! ditto what bill said. this is your first post? welcome to G1
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Old 01-01-2007, 02:26 PM   #5 (permalink)
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A nit - there seems to be an arch of lighter skin following the contour of her left eyebrow, at least on my monitor. Poorly blended makeup?

As a portrait - with the exception noted - wow! Nice job. For a glamour shot - and this is from someone who doesn't like overly PS'ed skin - I'd consider softening her skin a little bit, especially along the left cheek where I can see pores. I think that would make the eye "pop" a bit more.

Really nice work, IMO. Welcome abroad.
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Old 01-01-2007, 02:29 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks very much for all the nice comments and also the constructive ones. I will take them to heart.
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Old 01-01-2007, 03:43 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Ok, I fixed the light area above her eye and then smoothed out the skin a little. Is that any better???
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I also love the eye contact and the use of negative space.
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I too love the framing and eye contact....
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A few of the pro's here may want to see the whites of her eyes on both sides if the iris. It's been mentioned before but I like the image the way ou treated it in post.

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