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Newest Set - C&C Appreciated
Old 12-29-2006, 04:07 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Shot December 28th.

Limited PP - just curves and WB tweaking - a couple minor cropping changes. Otherwise no Post processing.

Still learning, but I feel that this set was much better than my last one. So let me have it... I'm ready to learn more!

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Re: Newest Set - C&C Appreciated
Old 12-29-2006, 12:13 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I will only address the lighting, which comes very close to what us old timers call Rembrandt lighting in #1 and #3, but also is (in this case) broad lighting, as it were.

In all of the images, I believe additional lighting or reflectors would have made the model stand out more from the background. and give separation to the hair and body. The example I have posted is NOTthe best, but does give some indication of what I mean.

If additional lights are not available and if you do not have reflectors, you can make reflectors from white foamcore.

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Re: Newest Set - C&C Appreciated
Old 12-29-2006, 03:07 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Well its hard to do a detailed critique of 5 photos. I'll thus try to do a hit or miss fast critique of your group. #1 doesn't have what I'd called "pop" but is pleasant enough. Generally, however, you don't want to crop below the joint, but instead crop above the joint. Try cropping this one just above the elbows and you'll see what I mean. #2 makes the arms look heavier and the red on red is not working too well. Different lighting could have helped. #3 needs more fill and the head looks overly large due to the angle of the shot and the pose. #4 has the most potential, but would be better with more arch to the back. #5 has lighting problems with the blacks. Also pay more attention to how the blouse falls.

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